I promise I’ll try to replace this image. But it is something that I drew that unfortunately lost quality through the scanner.
Here is my finished script for 162MC: Little Star script
MORNING. KEEKIN leaves for school with his mother. His mother appears to be a normal human whereas he has horn like stubs on his forehead and long ears like a deer.
At the school the other children there have stubs and long ears too, but they also have flat noses which Keekin does not. He is ostracised by the other children for his difference in appearance. In the sequence the children are identified as Elves.
An Elven teacher arrives to lead the children into class. During class Keekin observes some human children playing outside. He is struck on the head by object thrown by one of the other children.
NOON. PLAYTIME. UPSET Keekin hides from the other Elven children in a hedge bush. While hiding he is discovered by a hyperactive Elven girl who crashes through the hedge and almost lands on him.
The girl identifies herself as Yanya and expresses a desire to make friends with him. She plucks a flower from her hair and offers it to Keekin as a gesture of friendship. He is reluctant to accept the proposal but then he notices that Yanya is becoming upset. He takes the flower from her and she proceeds to embrace him in a tight hug.
Keekin returns to class, he is still receiving scowls from the other children. He notices Yanya across the room as she smiles and waves. He waves back and reaches for the flower in his pocket.
The school day comes to an end and Keekin meets his mother at the front gate. She asks him how his day was, he shows her the flower that Yanya gave him. As they leave Keekin turns around to look at the school and smiles, he knows that life here will be better.
NOTE: In addition to my short film’s outline I will also provide a link to the short story that the script will be based upon as it lists all the important plot points and characterisation.
Seq. 01 – Page 1 The First Day
Annie takes her son Keekin to his first day of school. When he gets there he is ostracised because he looks different from all the other children.
Seq. 02 – Page 2-3 Prejudice and Hope
Keekin is bullied in class and during playtime he hides from the other children. He is discovered by an energetic girl named Yanya who proceeds to befriend him.
Seq. – Page 4 A Better Tomorrow
Keekin returns to class, his mood has greatly improved. When home times comes around he meets his mother and tells her that he maid a friend.
Short Story link: http://seanmaguireyr1.wordpress.com/2014/01/25/161-little-star-short-story/
Annie ashford lived a pretty normal life, at least until she met her husband, he’s an elf by the way. One thing led to another and they were married. She had a baby boy whom they named Keekin (an elven phrase meaning Little Star). Will Annie and her husband be able to raise their son in the cruel and unforgiving world that waits just out their front door? and will Keekin ever find a friend?